This "quick check" is exactly that: QUICK. If your
application has been looked at for 30 seconds at this point, you are lucky.
Important:
This stage is also where MOST
applications end up in that big "NO" pile, never to be seen again. In many
cases, up to 90% of applications are "killed" right here - after 10-30 seconds
of consideration.
Seriously. Up to 90% of applications lose after 30 seconds of
consideration. For the percentage impaired... If the organization received 1,000
applications, up to 900 of the applications received lost the game right here.
When determining the acceptability of each application, many
organizations use a "checklist" or "point system" - often both.
Sometimes, a checklist or point system is used right from the beginning, but other times,
it's only used for the "somewhat potential" applications.
Here's an example of a checklist used by a scholarship committee
that I sat on last summer. Each application was looked at by the Administrative Assistant.
If the answer was "yes" for each question, then she sent the application to Tom
Atkins, who was the head of the Judging Committee. If there was a single
"no" - she threw the application out. Yes, into the garbage. She didn't
"judge" the STUDENTS - she "judged" the quality of the APPLICATIONS,
and decided which applications the judges would actually judge.
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Do you think it's "not fair" that
your application "lost" after just 30 seconds just because of a single typo or a
small wrinkle? It is not. It IS unfair of YOU to NOT take the time to make your
application neat, clean, and simply perfect. Remember, lots of students DO take the time
to make their applications neat and clean. It is unfair to those students who DO take the
time to create neat, clean applications for the judges to spend a single minute on the
students who do not take the time.
Your application will be considered against the scholarship's
primary requirements. For example, if the scholarship considers academic achievement, they
may quickly check your GPA at this point.
- And if your GPA is in the 2.0 range... it's probably dead.
- If it's in the low 3.0 range... there is still some hope.
- If it's in the upper 3.0 range, it's definetly alive!
Be aware that just because you do not have a terrific GPA does not
mean that you have "no hope" when applying for scholarships that are PRIMARILY
based on academic achievement. The "trick" is to improve your odds of winning by
applying for smaller scholarships and local scholarships, ones that do not receive a lot
of applications. With a low (2.0 GPA range) to a good (lower to middle 3.0 range GPA) you
have almost no hope of winning a big national scholarship based on academic achievement
that receives 20,000 applications. But if you apply to a local, small scholarship that
receives 10 or 100 applications, you have much better chances of winning, ESPECIALLY if
your GPA is in the 3.0 range.
Cere in Tacoma, Washington shares her experience:
"One thing I am concerned with is that some students might get
the message that if you don't have a really high grade point average don't bother. I am a
single parent going to school full time and can only manage to hold a 3.45gpa. I have been
lucky so far though and have received $3,500 so far in scholarships, so I know that not
having a perfect grade point won't hold you back from winning all the time."
Whatever the main considerations are for the particular scholarship
- be it grades, financial need, major, religion, hobbies, professional associations,
whatever - if your application doesn't match up to ALL of the basic requirements of the
scholarship, it's history at this point.
"Hrmmm... hey, this application seems good, Jason, 4.2 GPA,
very nice! Lots of volunteer work, helps his mother at her Catering business, very nice...
oh... he's studying Ghost Chasing, we're looking for Basket Weaving majors, oh well, too
bad..."
If you don't pay attention to the requirements, the judges are not
going to pay attention to your application.
How to "beat" Stage One:
- Be Neat! No coffee stains! Type your applications.
NO SPELLING ERRORS. None!
- Be Complete! Make sure you include all required
supporting documentation.
- Be Accurate! Make sure you match all the
requirements. If the scholarship is for English majors and you are studying Computers,
don't apply!
- Think about how to make your application STAND OUT.
Consider putting it into a plastic folder. If not forbidden, include school newspaper
clippings about you, additional recommendation letters, or other things that help you
shine!
- Read Bill's
Tips on Scholarship Applications that Win! Of all the information I have on
my website, this page of common-sense provided by Bill Reynolds has resulted in more
students WINNING scholarships than anything else - to date, 761 students have written to
me that they have won scholarships, and credit Bill's Tips for helping them make their
applications stand out and win.
Remember: Appearances Count. I am occasionally criticized
for telling students that their applications need to be neat and clean, people will write
to me that "it's common-sense and everyone knows that." My answer to that
criticism is simple: If "everyone" knew that they needed to be neat and clean on
their applications then why do so many applications look like they were written in a
fast-food kitchen?? *grins*
2. "Pick the Contenders" stage.
Remember that quite a few outstanding students ended up in the
"no" pile during the first stage because their APPLICATIONS were not good enough
- NOT because the STUDENT was not good enough.
This is an important point to remember:
The best APPLICATIONS get the serious consideration.
The person looking at the applications at this point may still be a
secretary, a volunteer, or an intern, or it may be the "Scholarship
Administrator." Sometimes, it is one of the "Official Judges," who has been
chosen to select the applications that are "seriously considered." It may be the
entire judging committee.
Sometimes this stage is "combined" with the "Weed out
the Junk" stage.
Either way, USUALLY at this stage in the game, your application is
being looked at for WHAT IS WRONG WITH IT. They are not looking for the BEST applications,
they are looking for the WORST applications, so they can "kill" them and get on
with the job.
This is a particularly tough stage to "win" - a critical
eye is being used to find ANY REASON WHATSOEVER TO SAY "NO" to your application.
#1 Reason your application will die here: Rudeness.
Be POLITE! Having personally read over
6,000 scholarship applications myself over the last two years, it amazes me how RUDE many
students can be. Remember: You are asking these people TO GIVE YOU MONEY. Rudeness will
not win you any points.
#2 Reason your application will die here: Spelling.
I know I harp on spelling over and over, but it's an EASY way for
judges to reduce the number of applications they have to seriously consider. If you have
even one spelling error, one typo, your application may well be history.
If you do not take the time to spell-check your application, the
judges will not take the time to read it.
"Let's see, we have Claire here, who is studying Competur
Sceince? Sheesh, she can't even spell her own major right!! Forget her!"
#3 Reason your application will die here: You don't
"make the grade."
At this point, your application is also being compared to other
applications that have been received. I'll use GPA as an example:
The judge or judges look at the first student in the pile. He or she
has a 3.6 GPA. Goes to the "potential yes" pile.
They look at the next student, who has a 3.4 GPA. Oops... they have
already seen an application from a student with a higher GPA, so this student "can't
compete" and goes into the "no" pile.
On it continues... while seriously looking at the applications,
there is still a "weeding out" going on... they look at each student, if they
have already seen one that is "better" off to the "no" pile it goes...
if, however, the application matches or is better than the best ones they have seen so
far, into the "potential yes" pile it goes.
Until they have found the very best applications, from the very best
students.
It is important to remember that even those scholarships that do NOT
consider academic achievement as their PRIMARY consideration are going to look at your
grades, your community service, your school activities - the judges are ultimately looking
at The Whole Person Who Is You, not just your grades or your need.
Some examples:
- The PRIMARY consideration is FINANCIAL NEED. That means the
"poorest" students are going to be considered, right?
Imagine there are 10 students who all have an EQUAL financial need: $30,000
in family income, two kids in college, one parent disabled.
But of those 10 students, one of them has a 3.0 GPA. That
application is going to STAND OUT from the other 9 who all have 2.6 GPAs.
- Maybe all 10 have 3.6 GPAs and equal need. But one of the students
has a lot of volunteer work and is active with their Church and their School. That student
is going to stand out above the others for serious consideration by the judges.
3. Pick The Winner.
This is where things get ugly ... Judges have their personal
favorites, fights break out, coffee mugs go flying, arguments occur over which student is
the best.
OK, that's an exaggeration *grins* but by now, YOU - and your
application - is now being discussed, debated, and fought-over.
Of all applications received, 1%-5% might make it to this stage. Or
less.
This stage is where YOU are finally "put on the stage" to
shine. Each application is looked at very, very, seriously.
No one is looking to say "no" to you - they are looking at
your application to find every reason possible to say YES to you. The judges will ask
themselves questions such as:
- WHY is this student better than that student?
- WHY does this student deserve our money? Our support?
- What makes this student outstanding?
And, somehow, amazingly enough, a winner is chosen. There is no easy
way to describe HOW out of the remaining 5, 10, or 100 applications the winner is
chosen... A lot of discussion will go on, "votes" will be taken, perhaps they
will use a point-system yet again, and assign a "grade" to each application...
"Application number 2012, from Bob in California, 3.9 GPA,
volunteers, active in school, studying Physics, who saved the entire city of San Mateo by
inventing an earthquake early-warning system when he was 7 years old, raised $200,000 for
Save the Armadillos, and wrote a chapter for Miss Manners... how many vote? I count 10 -
is that right? Mary, you are voting for Bob? I thought you hated San Mateo because that's
where your ex-husband lives?! Oh, I didn't know you got back together with your ex, Mary!
Congrats! It's 10 votes! We have a winner - Bob it is!"
OK, I am DEFINETLY making fun of the way the Final Decision
might be made... but it's also to make a point: While YES, the very best student is chosen
as the winner, the decision can also be somewhat SUBJECTIVE.
When you have 5 or 10 students who all have "equal"
academic achievement, community service, financial need, service to their schools, meet
all other requirements... the final decision sometimes comes down to who the judges LIKE
BEST.
This is where the time you spend on Personal Statements and Essays
will push you over the edge to the Winners Circle. Something about YOU - and your
application - stood out from the crowd enough that you won. You are The Best of The Best.
- To "beat" this stage of the game, REALLY READ the
application. Most applications TELL YOU who they are looking for.
- Write your personal statement so that it "talks" to the
judges, tells them what they want to hear, about you, but yet at the same time, is
truthful. Don't let your personal statement sound like a singles ad!
- Let your personality SHINE THROUGH! Let them know who you are, and
why you deserve to win!
- Tell the judges why you are a unique, special, deserving person, one
WORTHY of their time and money.
- Be the best PERSON you can be.
- Don't be pathetic, whining, rude, or ignorant.
Finally, remember that ultimately, it's the "whole person"
that is judged, not just your grades. You ARE a unique, special deserving person -
sometimes despite your grades! Let that shine through!!
Some Points to Ponder:
- If you don't take the time to check your spelling, the judges won't
take the time to read your application.
- If you don't take the application process seriously, the judges won't
take your application seriously.
- If you don't pay attention to the details, the requirements, the
judges won't pay attention to your application.
- The Polite student with a 3.2 GPA is going to beat out the Rude
student with a 4.0 GPA every time.
- Appearances Count.
- It's their money. They get to make the rules.
- The best APPLICATIONS get the serious consideration, from which the
best students will win.
- Up to 90% of all applications simply suck. Don't be part of that 90%.
This article was written by Laura DiFiore
from Fresch!
Fresch! is a free nationwide scholarship search located on the Internet at:
http://www.freschinfo.com
You can read the original article that this was copied from, plus view other great
resources at:
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